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Sludge 
"Charlie Don't Serf!"

Posted - 05/05/2010 :  20:57:35  Show Profile  Reply with Quote

Fritz Lang's futuristic visual masterpiece


MHC #203


Metropolis (1927)






Note: Looks like a nice 2 1/2 hour director's cut is playing in NYC .

Abbreviated rules borrowed from here to encourage some new entrants ....

The Rules

The first line of a haiku poem has five syllables.
The second line has seven syllables.
The third, and final, line has five syllables.

The Movie Haiku Contest (MHC) is open to every member of the FWFR site.

To enter, all you have to do is think of a Haiku for the current movie, then post into the current thread. Simple as that. Also, haikus may be risque, but nothing explicit please.

Only one entry per person as per The Blevins Rule. However, you are allowed to edit your existing entry until 9pm Tuesday FWFR time.


Voting.

If you have entered the MHC, then you have to vote. If you do not vote, you'll lose 3 points from your total, even if you are Sludge and its passover. This could mean the difference between the adoration and envy of your fellow Fwiffers or being the feckless butt of our jokes!

You do not have to enter an MHC to vote. Vote away. It'll be like a lurker vote!

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For each round, you get to vote for your three favourite haikus. The voting is as follows:

3 pts fwfr a
2 pts fwfr b
1 pt fwfr c
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You may vote only once
You cannot vote for yourself.
You can vote for the previous winner

You vote by sending your votes in a PM (Private Message) HERE, to Me.

When the voting deadline ends (9pm Wednesday 12MAY FWFR time), the votes are tallied and the top three places are announced.




Edited by - Sludge on 05/11/2010 00:45:14

Sludge 
"Charlie Don't Serf!"

Posted - 05/05/2010 :  20:58:47  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
Here's the irony:
Fritz said it would be like this!
Push buttons all day?



Note: A Los Angeles KNBC weather forecaster named Fritz Coleman was promoted in a series of ads with the 2nd line above

Edited by - Sludge on 05/06/2010 23:18:16
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BaftaBaby 
"Always entranced by cinema."

Posted - 05/06/2010 :  08:44:32  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
Robot at the Helm.
The Thin Man spies on Freder.
What film's this again?

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ChocolateLady 
"500 Chocolate Delights"

Posted - 05/06/2010 :  13:27:29  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
Workers can't plan and
planners don't know how to work.
How'd they get so far?
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MguyXXV 
"X marks the spot"

Posted - 05/11/2010 :  19:35:11  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
An early vision
of later society;
That robot is hot!
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Sludge 
"Charlie Don't Serf!"

Posted - 05/11/2010 :  19:42:00  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
No more takers? Anyone want to haiku the 6 minute Queen version?
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ChocolateLady 
"500 Chocolate Delights"

Posted - 05/12/2010 :  11:54:20  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
Voted.
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BaftaBaby 
"Always entranced by cinema."

Posted - 05/12/2010 :  12:10:23  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
Voted for Brigitte & Fritzie

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MguyXXV 
"X marks the spot"

Posted - 05/12/2010 :  16:15:22  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
I voted too!

Who's missing???

Edited by - MguyXXV on 05/12/2010 16:15:48
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Sludge 
"Charlie Don't Serf!"

Posted - 05/12/2010 :  18:48:34  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
Thanks all for your timely voting!

This was a nail-biter, with ChocolateLady and MguyX leaving Bafta and me to fight over scraps off the factory floor.

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In 2nd place, with -7- points,

MGUYX (3 3 1)

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Sneaking past MGUYX with -8- points,

CHOCOLATE LADY (3 3 2)

Chocolate Lady,

Congrats!

Please make your pick for Haiku Contest #204 to liberate the proletariat.


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ChocolateLady 
"500 Chocolate Delights"

Posted - 05/13/2010 :  05:22:26  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
Oh, what a shock! Well, lets see what movie would work as a haiku this time...
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